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July 1, 2012
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AT :: JinZhan by Tsuki--Dono AT :: JinZhan by Tsuki--Dono
    :icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz: :iconnoncommercial1plz::iconnoncommercial2plz:

    Time taken in total : About 20 hours.
    Layers in total : 60.
    Program used : Adobe Photoshop CS6 & SAI.
    Original Size : 3440x1932.

    .:。☆*゚‘゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆。:.

    His part : [link]

    Finally, I finished my part and it's about one year he expected.
    I have no excuse for the delay.


    In any case I present my apologies for being late.

    .:。☆*゚‘゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆。:.

    ☆ Character © :iconjinzhan:
    ☆ Drawing © :icontsuki--dono:
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What an amazing feeling of SUMMER! Like how some people have said, this picture is amazing~But not the best.

Here is some of chunks I can give you to improve:

~Her eyes, and face looks a bit awkward. The eyes especially look slightly off the spot.
~I like the texture you did on the pants. But unfortunately, the rest of her body, and the floating hoop looks like they have the same texture. So you might wanna try another method of shading to do the clothes.

Some praising:

~That is an amazingly well done water. The sparkles make a great touch to it.
~As usual, I love how you color. I am no good at cel shading.

That is about it I can say. I hope I aint too mean!

Love Aoibara
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Another critique, since it feels like it's been forever since my last one xD

To start things off, I like this drawing a lot. The colors are bright and well used for this picture. The water looks amazing! :D Like the other person that had critiqued said, the sparkles make a nice touch to it.
The technique is good with how your shading style is.
The impact with the drawing is good also.

However, you might need to fix the face a little bit with maybe a little more detail. Other than that, this picture is well done.

Keep up the good work, Tsuki! c:
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anxiri Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Photographer
Good work, I like the glittery shine on the water :meow:
btw: nice gallery! :D
SatoshiKitsune Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your problem is cheek and head. But it's ok for the rest of the body.
I-and-Me Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
water effect... approved! :D
Juss-in-time Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Magnifique! :3
agenory Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Les effets de lumière et de l'eau sont vraiment bien réalisés ! Et j'aime bine l'idée avec les cheveux
J'ai un peu de mal sur ce dessin il est beau mais je pense qu'il y a des problèmes de proportions.
Je ne pense pas que la cuisse gauche devrait être aussi visible par exemple ^^.
DemiseMAN Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
kawaaai!!! I love it!
JDogindy Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good job here with this piece.
Kirinora-Hime Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing (;
Bwsr3 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really really love the coloring on this one!!! I especially love what you did with the water. :)
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
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