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    Time taken in total : About 20 hours.
    Layers in total : 60.
    Program used : Adobe Photoshop CS6 & SAI.
    Original Size : 3440x1932.


    .:。☆*゚‘゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆。:.

    His part : [link]

    Finally, I finished my part and it's about one year he expected.
    I have no excuse for the delay.

    :iconsobcryplz:

    In any case I present my apologies for being late.

    .:。☆*゚‘゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆。:.

    ☆ Character © :iconjinzhan:
    ☆ Drawing © :icontsuki--dono:
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:iconxaoibarax:
What an amazing feeling of SUMMER! Like how some people have said, this picture is amazing~But not the best.

Here is some of chunks I can give you to improve:

~Her eyes, and face looks a bit awkward. The eyes especially look slightly off the spot.
~I like the texture you did on the pants. But unfortunately, the rest of her body, and the floating hoop looks like they have the same texture. So you might wanna try another method of shading to do the clothes.

Some praising:

~That is an amazingly well done water. The sparkles make a great touch to it.
~As usual, I love how you color. I am no good at cel shading.

That is about it I can say. I hope I aint too mean!

Love Aoibara
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:iconmani-hime:
Another critique, since it feels like it's been forever since my last one xD

To start things off, I like this drawing a lot. The colors are bright and well used for this picture. The water looks amazing! :D Like the other person that had critiqued said, the sparkles make a nice touch to it.
The technique is good with how your shading style is.
The impact with the drawing is good also.

However, you might need to fix the face a little bit with maybe a little more detail. Other than that, this picture is well done.

Keep up the good work, Tsuki! c:
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:iconanxiri:
anxiri Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Photographer
Good work, I like the glittery shine on the water :meow:
btw: nice gallery! :D
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SatoshiKitsune Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your problem is cheek and head. But it's ok for the rest of the body.
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:iconi-and-me:
I-and-Me Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
water effect... approved! :D
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:iconjuss-in-time:
Juss-in-time Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Magnifique! :3
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:iconagenory:
agenory Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Les effets de lumière et de l'eau sont vraiment bien réalisés ! Et j'aime bine l'idée avec les cheveux
J'ai un peu de mal sur ce dessin il est beau mais je pense qu'il y a des problèmes de proportions.
Je ne pense pas que la cuisse gauche devrait être aussi visible par exemple ^^.
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:icondemiseman:
DemiseMAN Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
kawaaai!!! I love it!
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:iconjdogindy:
JDogindy Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good job here with this piece.
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:iconkirinora-hime:
Kirinora-Hime Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing (;
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:iconbwsr3:
Bwsr3 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really really love the coloring on this one!!! I especially love what you did with the water. :)
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Sweet
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:iconzark04:
Zark04 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Nice work!!
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:iconssonya:
sSonya Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
~ Amazing ! This is amazing !!
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:iconwillow-san:
Willow-San Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Je le trouve tr!s bien ce dessin °_° J'ai l'impression que tu as fais beaucoup de progrès *0*
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:iconcatak-dcw:
Catak-DCW Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
looks good to me
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:iconazurerat:
AzureRat Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great water work.
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:iconfruit-sauvage:
Fruit-Sauvage Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sympa, ça change de tes compos habituelles. Un peu de plage et de soleil et les gadgets high-tech au placard X).
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JinZhan Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Hahaha :XD: no need to apologies ^_^ you draw her great and lot of effort~ and thats worth waiting for :iconimbishieplz:
no~ rly~~ I would have forgot about it if you didn't mention ^_^ (:icontsundereplz: its not like I've been waiting for this for a long time or something~)
HAHAHAHA :XD: thank you again ^_^ shall :icongollumplz::iconsaysplz:MYY PRECIOUS THIS.....
LOL XDDD
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:iconcat55:
cat55 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
awesome
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:iconraphael7:
Raphael7 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh god this looks awsome, and she looks hot, i find this pic flawless
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:iconisacchi:
isacchi Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
uhooo nice picture :la:
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:iconkakashilover11:
kakashilover11 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student General Artist
i like the background !!!!!
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:iconphoenixwrite0122:
phoenixwrite0122 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i hate being a loli but yet i love it so much . . . any one els feel like that ?
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Alyster7 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
so cute, i absolutely love this, i adore how her hair changes color
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:iconruurin:
Ruurin Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like the colours and the way you did the ripples on the water! *u*/ <33
And the hair is really beautiful, the way it flows like that ♥

As for a little critique, ( if you don't mind C: ) I think the face is just a little too thin, and eyes are a little too close together. Everything else looks amazing >u<b it's just the proportions on the head shape, and the positioning of the facial features that need a little working on~
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:iconwecantfly:
wecantfly Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cuute
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:iconcamilia-chan:
Camilia-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kawaii!! :love:
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:iconetoiletan:
EtoileTan Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Bah putain...
Encore un chef-d'oeuvre =w=
Hooray For Tsuki \o/

Le fond est magnifique, vraiment !
Les textures sont parfaites et l'eau est très bien faite (en gros comme d'hab)
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:iconmikki-saigen:
Mikki-Saigen Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Very cute!
Good job!
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:iconkenny25jkl13:
kenny25jkl13 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
:heart:
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:iconsoncurran:
SonCurran Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Sexy girl ^ ^
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:iconbuddysteel:
BuddySteel Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Vraiment très beau ! Tes skillz en colo sont toujours aussi impressionnants ! ^^
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scarlet-glow Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
amazing~!<3
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:iconsergentskull:
SergentSkull Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
très jolie dit moi
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