What an amazing feeling of SUMMER! Like how some people have said, this picture is amazing~But not the best.
Here is some of chunks I can give you to improve:
~Her eyes, and face looks a bit awkward. The eyes especially look slightly off the spot. ~I like the texture you did on the pants. But unfortunately, the rest of her body, and the floating hoop looks like they have the same texture. So you might wanna try another method of shading to do the clothes.
~That is an amazingly well done water. The sparkles make a great touch to it. ~As usual, I love how you color. I am no good at cel shading.
That is about it I can say. I hope I aint too mean!
Another critique, since it feels like it's been forever since my last one xD
To start things off, I like this drawing a lot. The colors are bright and well used for this picture. The water looks amazing! Like the other person that had critiqued said, the sparkles make a nice touch to it. The technique is good with how your shading style is. The impact with the drawing is good also.
However, you might need to fix the face a little bit with maybe a little more detail. Other than that, this picture is well done.
Les effets de lumière et de l'eau sont vraiment bien réalisés ! Et j'aime bine l'idée avec les cheveux J'ai un peu de mal sur ce dessin il est beau mais je pense qu'il y a des problèmes de proportions. Je ne pense pas que la cuisse gauche devrait être aussi visible par exemple ^^.